Souls are your children
Very affectionate they are,
You are Supreme Soul
You are eternal father
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Thoughtful poem with great imageries. I enjoyed reading every line of your poem.
Great souls eagerly hear, Your flute of true wisdom, They swing around you As they are points of light.. a mystical poem. God is light..... the souls all flying around in light...... unseen, untouched God is present everywhere......... we all emanate from this eternal light......... thank u for this great poem. tony
Lovely imagery used in this poem: ''In this Confluence Age, Great souls eagerly hear, Your flute of true wisdom, They swing around you As they are points of light As you are supreme point, They get parental love, Only from you dear God, Eternally they love you.'' - Absolutely lovely!
soul is children! // interesting poem Oh! I'm the being of mortal timid child of nature inside, the soul- eternal part of God but my childish and childlike mentality makes it rusty, darkly d.e.v, l.i.s.h in the course of time! ....///
You are right sir. Souls are children of God. We love his grace to receive. This poem is heart touching poem!