Sunday, March 19, 2006

Souls Of Old Comments

Rating: 4.7

The burial ground came out of the past.
A spinster a blacksmith and courtesan
all seemed downcast.
Time had stood still with their names
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michele kostelnik
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Nimal Dunuhinga 15 October 2010

The old souls are very strong and the death never roams around As she's scared of poverty and she thinks nothing could be taken to her domicile? I love the rationalistic way you write!

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Kee Thampi 19 March 2006

The burial ground came out of the past. A spinster a blacksmith and courtesan all seemed downcast. Time had stood still with their names chiseled on stone. Leaves of beautiful colors and tall grass- all windblown. It was lonely in this overgrown place. A tavenier claimed those days were at Color of the dead body and his caste and poverty and his social down status makes.... In India, we really feel it Many developed nations this is in other forms. this poem is one of the great poem of today. it conveys the great message, even at the time of globalization..... The poet Michele you make classic work. My best wishes. Kee Thampi

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Charles Chaim Wax 19 March 2006

a place where dreams float above the headstones not high just at eye level so can be seen by all and all can feel the majesty of human effort which of course in the end cannot triump but for a moment and this this the old souls say a fine poem

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