Saturday, August 20, 2011

Souls In The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

At funeral sides
With widows and friends
The passing wind cries -
Yet, never stops, never ends...
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Smoky Hoss
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Wendy Thopliss 30 August 2011

In the end we all must go but it leaves us torn. Are we pleased that we will see our loved ones again, or are we sad that we will leave loved ones behind. Great poem Smoky.

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Juan Olivarez 24 August 2011

sometimes I swear I can hear them as they pass by, absolutely great write.

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Patti Masterman 22 August 2011

That wind takes everyone in the end. This is beautiful the way you have handled it here.

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Shelly Hay 20 August 2011

I really enjoyed your poem.

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