The Devil decided
One dark dreary day
To have a garage sale..
He had bills to pay!
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Wow, a great moral poem, what great construction and subject, a fab read which was a pleasure. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Very cute Dee, I enjoyed this poem. I am glad the ending was good. I thought it might be frightening. Excellent write.
Wonderful, mature rhyme, accurate message - simply fab, Dee. t x
And I have found a new sunrise, , , , , sorry Dee the words right off the top..... Very Inspiring piece, and a very enjoyable read.......nice pen ya hold
An interesting tale Dee: the Devil has a conscience - wants to pay his bills - and the underlying message about redemption! Cleverly devised and disguised theme. And entertaining. Excellent all round poem. jim xx