Friday, October 20, 2006

Souls For Sale Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Devil decided
One dark dreary day
To have a garage sale..
He had bills to pay!
...
Read full text

Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
Not a member No 4 09 February 2007

An interesting tale Dee: the Devil has a conscience - wants to pay his bills - and the underlying message about redemption! Cleverly devised and disguised theme. And entertaining. Excellent all round poem. jim xx

0 0 Reply
Ernestine Northover 20 October 2006

Wow, a great moral poem, what great construction and subject, a fab read which was a pleasure. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

0 0 Reply
Ruby Root 20 October 2006

Very cute Dee, I enjoyed this poem. I am glad the ending was good. I thought it might be frightening. Excellent write.

0 0 Reply
Joe Breunig 20 October 2006

Cute write with a great morale theme; nice job.

0 0 Reply

Wonderful, mature rhyme, accurate message - simply fab, Dee. t x

0 0 Reply
Geoff Warden 20 October 2006

And I have found a new sunrise, , , , , sorry Dee the words right off the top..... Very Inspiring piece, and a very enjoyable read.......nice pen ya hold

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success