Friday, August 26, 2005

Soulmate Comments

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You may be surprise how I know most of the things you do
How could I read your mind, how could I see beyond you.
It's not magic or tricks my girl.. maybe if we look beyond
Maybe it's the what they call 'soulmate'
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Mark Anthony Mendoza
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Unknown Me 17 January 2006

cant believe there are people who still believe in soulmates.. sound in love in the poem.. LOL

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A Harrie 26 August 2005

This has a nice feel to it, keep writing while you feel so captivated, it is beautiful inspiration! Amanda

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 26 August 2005

Mark, I like your 'Soulmate' a lot! I have a 'few' suggestions that will add to your piece! I know ur in love so I'll be easy on you...this time...LOL! Ok, here goes: 'Maybe it's what..dropp the (the) ' 'Pointing in that direction...' And it is called 'forever love' ...like the same things what if we believe it is (really) vision (is) telling me But all of this maybe too soon. How many laps there is The poem is good!

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