Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Soulmate (Acrostic) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sweet surrender of finding
One's tired soul unwinding
Until life no longer matters;
Love unchains all its fetters.
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Roshni D'Souza
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~ Jon London ~ 01 June 2009

Great piece, every line filled with depth..and all composed in the best possible taste...nice work

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a short poem withdepth...liked the style

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 May 2009

that's a great poem with...depth....nice one, though short arouses the mind's eye 10+++

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fanttastic acrostic. you gave it good meaning

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Obed Souza 20 May 2009

Lovely, dear! All we need: to find people with whom we can share our hearts...

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Catrina Heart 20 May 2009

a beautiful acrostic piece written.........10

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