favorite lines so far:
I couldn't say more because I was surprised and shocked
I didn't know how to react
I just didn't understand anything
Instead I felt sorry for you
What you've been through
At the same time shocked on what you were doing
and
But
I'm not your Diamond
I'll never be
You never loved me and never will
You just have a broken heart that needs to heal
speaking as a man, though an older one, much older, i can look at your photo (maybe not you?) and tell myself:
Damn, i can see why he might want to act 'silly' around you. You must turn lots of heads! [maybe the poem is completely made up also]
before i forget, let me say i am really enjoying this 'story'/poem. there are some minor English 'errors' perhaps, or places where i would use a little different wording, but this poem, when i finish reading it, will go into MyPoemList. i do not rate poems with numbers, but with my words and by putting my favorite ones into MyPoemList.
I'm already taken
Understand that and move on. .........................this reminds me of what a female coworker told me when i made it clear i was very 'interested' in her. she told me to go home and work on my (third) marriage; i'm with my fourth wife now, and SHE was never my coworker!
bri :)
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favorite lines so far: I couldn't say more because I was surprised and shocked I didn't know how to react I just didn't understand anything Instead I felt sorry for you What you've been through At the same time shocked on what you were doing and But I'm not your Diamond I'll never be You never loved me and never will You just have a broken heart that needs to heal speaking as a man, though an older one, much older, i can look at your photo (maybe not you?) and tell myself: Damn, i can see why he might want to act 'silly' around you. You must turn lots of heads! [maybe the poem is completely made up also] before i forget, let me say i am really enjoying this 'story'/poem. there are some minor English 'errors' perhaps, or places where i would use a little different wording, but this poem, when i finish reading it, will go into MyPoemList. i do not rate poems with numbers, but with my words and by putting my favorite ones into MyPoemList. I'm already taken Understand that and move on. .........................this reminds me of what a female coworker told me when i made it clear i was very 'interested' in her. she told me to go home and work on my (third) marriage; i'm with my fourth wife now, and SHE was never my coworker! bri :)