Tuesday, December 3, 2013

Soulmate Comments

Rating: 4.6

when I slept
I found your shadow in the verses
translated a whole alphabets
from the beats of soul that tempestuous
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adheez van der beanthz
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Mohammad Skati 19 May 2015

A wonderful poem. I loved it. Thanks.

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Chinedu Dike 13 January 2015

A well articulated and nicely penned love poem that captures the bliss of love in the inner recesses of the heart. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Valsa George 25 March 2014

in every script I entrust prayer for you soulmate; anywhere Day in and day out, when you are surrounded by thoughts of your soulmate, what more can you give to your soulmate other than your loving and heart felt prayers? A very passionate write Adheez!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 25 March 2014

Lovely piece.

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Susan Lacovara 04 March 2014

The stitching together of soulmates, woven with the finest of threads. The precision of your pen brings to life the beautiful connection. Wonderful! PEACE

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Queeny Gona 02 January 2014

Wonderful prayer for the wellbeing of your soulmate and is really rich with genuine emotions dear poet pal. May you read and comment upon my work too Tell Told Love Tale

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Sallam Yassin 25 December 2013

?? ???? beautiful genuine and burst of emotion bravo

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Patricia Grantham 23 December 2013

So beautifully written and very intense. Once you have found your soulmate love seems to blossom. Keep on penning your beautiful poems. Enjoyed.

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Savita Tyagi 22 December 2013

Excellent verses. Your play with words beautiful! Thanks for sharing.

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Yasmin Khan 22 December 2013

It seems springing from your soul, real, rich, steeped in emotions for the soul-mate.

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Unwritten Soul 21 December 2013

Very nice thought, it is a good one :) _Soul

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Kelvin Owusu 21 December 2013

A Lovely write, flows nicely good work

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Gary H 21 December 2013

Love is a nice thing, i thought i had a soulmate once but hey. Good job

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Gary H 21 December 2013

I felt like this once, good stuff.

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Michael Gale 15 December 2013

Nice are the words so versed...As into the night, and into the brain, well so dispersed? :)

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 10 December 2013

obviously someone in love... very romantic.. i liked it..10/10

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Zehra Fatima 09 December 2013

wonderful poem..prfectly written. :)

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Olayinka Samson Aremu 09 December 2013

I guess you are in love. They say love brings inspiration, that's why you are able to pen this great work. Blessed be thy pen noble poet

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Noreen Carden 09 December 2013

A beautiful poem and prayer for a soulmate

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 07 December 2013

@billy: it's not bout poetry, it's bout someone who you love so much, someone who you called soulmate btw thanks for the comment, i appreciate it a lot

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