Would you for me
Hold me so tight
When pain's killing
And life's dying
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Four lines, yet captures a million feelings, the ardor of love And the feeling of longing. Beutiful stuff Richard!
This is constructive criticism that makes the poet feel very good. And learn a lot! THX so very much, Kevin!
Kevin, I'm honoured, and humbled, by you adding my poem to your favourites. THX so much!