Saturday, March 7, 2009

Soulmate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hey!
You call yourself
My Soulmate
Did you ever try to count
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Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari
COMMENTS
Wendy Bureau 19 March 2009

Heart wrenching.. How easy and trite the term Soulmate. If all could love from the inside out, True love wouldn't be so hard to find.. Sad, yet beautifully written. Wendy

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Anjali Sinha 10 March 2009

very sad and a poignant one too very sad that your soulmate does not understand your kind and loving heart give her time dear and she will notice it whatever, dont be depressed and take all these as worries. a nice write dear Kamran +++++10 anjali

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Lee Crowell 09 March 2009

sounds to me like you wanted the relationship to be more than it was I'm sorry that didn't happen for you people are not dependable when it comes to emotional needs I strive to not expect anything from anyone and occasionally there are pleasant surprises for all the other times I just try to find ways to not let the loneliness get me down

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 March 2009

Well done a truely relatable poem! nicely written!

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Seema Aarella 09 March 2009

Your dejection is justifiable, its no use admiring a body without getting familiar with the soul.....your anguish is heard aloud! ! ! ! good write! !

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