Thursday, March 29, 2007

Soulmate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Things that send souls alight hold you down like a stone
Jaded wings growing heavy before taking flight
Like a hermit at heart, who can not be alone
You are driven to those that won’t stay by your side
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Masha Danevasha
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Geoff Warden 09 April 2007

Well now mirrors reflect and show what is already known, but look past the obvious and see the prysmic patterns of lights reflection......great write...Lady M...

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Original Unknown Girl 04 April 2007

A most insightful piece, love the third stanza, very fine indeed! You certainly haven't lost your touch dear Masha. HG: -) xx

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Esther Leclerc 29 March 2007

Intelligent, insightful, dense with meaning.... a wonderful write, Masha; going into my favorites. But first, I must read it twice more. Esther xx

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