Sunday, October 16, 2016

Soully Robbed Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I wake
In darkness
Of daylight
Begging now
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Richard Wlodarski
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Bri Edwards 13 August 2017

did this start as a dream? i assume the difference in Soully and Solely and sole was intentional. the lack of punctuation was slightly annoying; it made me work a bit and maybe guess a bit. but i've seen a lot worse! ! ! it DIDN'T/doesn't sound like a 'happy dream. that's for sure. this is the first poem, with 'soul' or 'soully' in the title, which i ran across while looking for Soul's Journey, so i stopped to look. at least you claim to have gotten to sleep! you were lucky, .... unless the dreams were worse than sleep deprivation. bri :)

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Richard Wlodarski 17 August 2017

Bri, the sole self is communicating with the soul self through lucid dreams and nightmares to resolve some issues. The experience is scary, yet very liberating! The lack of punctuation is strictly intentional. Its designed that way to give you a sense of what the writer is experiencing...annoyance, frustration, struggle, fear. And ultimately, liberation!

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