Sunday, June 16, 2013

Soul V/S Body Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lust of body, make thee blind.
Eyes of soul, Renovate to plants of Rappichines,
Nourishes by venom, Nurture for the sake of money ,
As, Buzzing bees flutter for honey,
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2016

Lust is part of mankind; but, true love is superior! Thanks for sharing.

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Bayan Mirza 19 August 2014

Another wonderful poem i truly enjoyed, it is as emotional and vividly described as the other! The rhymes here are stronger as well, yet the balance is a bit off making the lines a bit shaky... Do excuse me for my brute honesty, I really mean no offense at all, and I hope you would kindly criticize my poems as well because we all have lots to learn from each other! Thank you! ! : D

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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

body is just a item of clothing of soul. a great thought.

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Sallam Yassin 28 June 2013

we all keen where the balance between body an. soul so the joy for us is beyond the wall/ well done Farah

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C. P. Sharma 28 June 2013

Body's beauty we all boast To soul's beauty I present a toast.

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Heather Wilkins 27 June 2013

excellent poem. good thoughts

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R.j. Wynn 21 June 2013

Another beautifully written gem.

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R.j. Wynn 21 June 2013

Another beautifully written gem.

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R.j. Wynn 21 June 2013

Another beautifully written gem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 June 2013

Lo pardaa uthh gayaa.....Truly wrote body a clothe to the soul very nice a smell of spiritualism

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Vineet Chhikara 18 June 2013

Soul.... actually I dont believe in this aatma and par aatma... but still i loved ur poems....

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Tajudeen Shah 18 June 2013

Dear Poet, Thanx to God, your lines have made many bards contemplate profoundly on soul, body and even more into sensible maxims of life. wonderful. When absolute realities of man, nature, soul, God and lives here and there are manifested conspicuously, blessed hearts might stop looking for salvation, rather might engage in serving needy souls; in any dimension of needs. God Bless you to pen still wonderful verses for today and futurity to dine upon. cheers, Regards. Love.

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Patricia Grantham 18 June 2013

The soul and the body are one entity. Body can not exist by itself, soul gives life to the body. A nice write.

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Wahab Abdul 17 June 2013

you got here one vote but 10 comments.. i wonder why?

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Unwritten Soul 17 June 2013

Soul is the essence of life that makes body alives.... as if i give some of mine to the stone, sure it talks to you how the life as it is...and who you are is not the body made you, but how you define yourself, your soul..as soul made of emotion, mind and mystery ingredients..to refine life, as i told u..nice work_Unwritten Soul

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Soumita Sarkar 17 June 2013

What's Rappishines? ...yes the line- body is the cloak of soul is good............Cheers!

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Vishal Sharma 17 June 2013

great write indeed far better than me liked the idea presented wow

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Shahzia Batool 17 June 2013

you have a bold soul farah that's why you touched this matter, references have the relevance with your theme, and the way you capitalize the letters give the touch and the reminder of E.Dickinson...

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Payal Parande 16 June 2013

i am in awe....you make me speechless didi always and i envy you so much for that bravo..... the hunger of body is hormonal but the hunger of soul is the who proves that you are a human........

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Xelam Kan™ 16 June 2013

Once a sage was asked what's soul......? He said nothing but your posture's shadow....the way you act, the more it reflects...the unconscious' reflection...... Indeed body clothes a soul but its not something to stand alone.... our body mirrors what we are to whom you called a SOUL...... Not bad.....

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