Tuesday, January 19, 2016

Soul To Take Comments

Rating: 5.0

Not friends have I, that I can bare my soul
Yet in these words I can allow
Why? Why don't I have people to confide?
I used to, perhaps it's my pride.
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Daniel Bates
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Ruchi Chaurasiya 30 August 2018

Dear Danial, Love and relationship always strangle our life at some point and made us feel hopeless. You beautifully captured this thought. Good things always take time. I love this poetry.

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Roseann Shawiak 20 January 2016

Devoutly said, we all need love and someone to give us unconditional love, someone we can trust to confide in, knowing we are safe and providing them with the same confidence in you. Really great poem, I enjoyed reading it, steady rhythm and rhyme help project your inner desires. Give it a 10! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Daniel Bates 20 January 2016

Thank you kindly Roseann. A very nice comment in deed.

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