Soul Tie Comments
My eyes are blue,
And his are brown.
His hands are tan,
While mine are pink.
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Very fine poem on love and universal feature of love..love knows no limitation...heart is beyond condition...
We think of each other Simultaneously, And then he phones me. We feel the same things. invisible thread........ a soul tie.. such fine expressions dear poetess. tony
Thank you so much, Dr. Tony. The sensitive heart of one poet, appreciating another! :)
I am sure that you do have a soul-tie with this man. Striking contrast of your physical features and qualities, followed by the ways you are linked together. Fine writing.
Thank you, Michael. I'm very grateful for your insight. As time goes on and I get to know him even better, the contrasts continue to increase, and are quite amazing. But like they say, opposites attract! I hope & pray I can live up to your compliment of 'fine writing'!
Beautiful love poem nicely penned from the heart. In-between the lines, I see an instinctive liking - a mutual affinity. Thanks for sharing Poetess
Chinedu, I appreciate your appreciation of my very personal poem! Thanks so much!
Brown and blue eyes share vision with deep love and affection. An invisible thread connects the vision in life and mind sings very well. You have brilliantly penned this poem...10
Many thanks, Kumarmani! There is definitely a connection between him and me. I was tormented by missing him so much during his travels away, and he prayed for me for peace (without telling me this until much later.) I experienced 3 days straight of unbroken peace, free of torment, after he prayed! Amazing!
Thank ya, Bec! (I need those prayers!) I must be patient, and stay busy with my own responsibilities in the meantime. Pining away by the phone won't bring him back any quicker. Listening to Eva Cassidy's incomparable voice croon sweet lovesongs right now- - Not sure that's helping any! :)
How Beautiful This Intertwines! ! ! ! ! Touching Hearts! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles I Hope You Both Find! ! ! ! ! Ever So Beautiful Tess! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Thank you, Bec. This poem captures the initial rush of all those sweet new feelings. But right now, I am missing him terribly because he is away on a long trip (2700 miles away! : ( And he will not be back until January, so that means my Christmas will be without him. He flew out to where he is. I can only hope and pray that he gets back here safely. Thanks for appreciating this poem!
I think that you can find lasting happiness with an Hispanic man. Why worry about a different culture different language. The language of love is universal. It's a tremendous milestone that you have reached 100 poems already too.
Thank you, Michael. You seem to find the most positive way of seeing things! I am starting to learn a little Spanish. Like French, it is a romance language, so the root words are similar. Thank you for being not only a top poet, but one of my best critic/ commenters!
Thank you, Rini! I am glad that it shows! 'Love makes the world go round' 'All you need is love! ' (The Beatles)
Thanks so much, Lamar. I am just SO-O-O-O HAPPY! I have a bazillion oldies lovesongs running through my head right now, such as 'You've made me so very happy', 'Oh, how happy you have made me', 'I only want to be with you', etc. etc.
Thank you, Bernard. A lovely write was inspired by a lovely man. I'm pinching myself to see if this is all a happy dream! It is wonderful to be able to finally write real, true love poetry, instead of only from my imagination. Thank you, as always, for your comments!
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7/29/2025 4:23:52 PM # 1.0.0
It seems we're connected By an invisible thread. Must be a soul-tie......appreciated the concept of invisible thread. A fantastic poem.....top score.