Saturday, December 22, 2012

Soul's Worldly Sojourn Comments

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This world is full of imperfections;
even more of contradictions.
Here pain and pleasure both reside;
contempt and pity walk side by side.
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Elena Sandu 28 December 2012

This world is full of imperfections; even more of contradictions. Here pain and pleasure both reside; contempt and pity walk side by side. Now I am full of wonders again, is this a brilliant definition of living things? We have also the diamond key: Humane if humans were to be, lesser would sufferance be. Thank you for this amazing write!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 27 December 2012

A beautiful poem on the Soul's sojourn in the world where things are both perfect and imperfect! I loved the entire write.THANKS.

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Valerie Dohren 24 December 2012

The meaning of your poem is summed up In the last four lines. Very well written, with great insight.

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