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One Mind One Love Tears flowing Purifying Cleansing of all sin Rejuvenating.........such a fine poem. so much spiritual dear poet. i liked it immensely.. i fel i am resurrected after reading your poem well............ so happy about this poem. light, love, Jesus Christ, soul..........sooo fine. thank u. tony
Tony, it makes me so happy to receive such a positive response from you. I love your poetry so much. You are one of the gifted poets that I truly respect. Your continued support and encouragement has not gone unnoticed. Thank You so very much!
I liked how you put the explanatory paragraphs at the end of each stanza. It seems to bring the reader closer to the poem.
Carl, thank you so much for your valuable feedback. You are right on target! This type of experience is extremely difficult to describe. To do it as succinctly as I have was very challenging. I felt that the explanatory paragraphs gave the reader a sense of almost being there.
Many years ago, I had read 'Life After Life' in a condensed form in Reader's Digest. It also contained many such experiences of 'dead' persons who later came to life.
So captivating and overwhelming account of a soul's journey to the other world from where it is sent back to finish its pending work. The words unfold the gravity of situation at every stage. Hair-raising experience. Tears flowing Purifying Cleansing of all sin Rejuvenating
Rajnish, you've summed it up beautifully. Thank you so much for reading the whole series!
You are right, Richard. It is the beauty of a poem. Freedom! Series of free verses.
Sincerest thanks, Wei for reading and commenting!