Saturday, November 17, 2012

Soul Return Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life confused thought scattered
Dreams unattainable
Unreachable destiny
Everything rejected
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Jahan Zeb
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Kelvin Owusu 27 November 2012

this is a great poem from lost til found our soul is eternal if not darken but given the right ingredients you may say

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Sun Shine 22 November 2012

It depends upon the feelings..how you percieve life...... :) Life is precious make it sweet or happy! Great depiction of thoughts and emotions..!

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Dave Walker 20 November 2012

The soul will always return. A great poem.

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Persian Khushi 19 November 2012

I have said before that you are an excellent poet. May you always have this calm for i feel it has given you direction.

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Stevie Taite 17 November 2012

X x x x this is just beautiful! Happiness is to be searched for sometimes. X x

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Jahan Zeb

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