Wednesday, June 13, 2012

Soul Of The Ocean Comments

Rating: 2.8

Ocean, oh my sweet ocean
I smell your scent among the forests
upon the rivers that flow.
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Kasia Fedyk
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Chyna Parker 03 July 2012

I absolutely love the imagery! Perfectly stated! well done!

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Ramesh Rai 16 June 2012

soul of the ocean. Amazing. certainly a beautiful poem. the sun settle in your arms, xlent. i must like to vote 10+++++++++++

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Captain Cur 15 June 2012

I would love to pirate on this ocean. What a magnificent poem. Utterly beautiful and full of rich metaphor's and love, love, so much love.

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Randy Hogan 14 June 2012

I live in the mountains but dream of the ocean. Ode to be a turtle I wish I wish. I would love to Hold a hand that writes as beautiful as you. ~*~Randy

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Prakhar Mishra 14 June 2012

a good poem and specially when u say i ' surrender ' the greatest of all feelings all the words sounds like a lover is this 'KASIAN' way................i truly love the words when they r meant for some love concerns

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Khalid Jassim 14 June 2012

its so nice poem...loved it........some words i read feel as if am reading for Walt Whitman.....good luck poet...your poem calling the anguish inside my soul............really so nice.....

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You are the Beloved's arms; To me as the sun settles in your arms saying goodbye to the world for a brief moment allowing the moon, her lover to shine resting upon your arms in the darkness. (Left me gasping.... may His word flows like endless streams through you...Amen.)

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Savita Tyagi 13 June 2012

Beautiful poem. You are the Beloved's arms; To me as the sun settles in your arms saying goodbye to the world for a brief moment allowing the moon, her lover to shine resting upon your arms in the darkness. Love these lines.

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