Ocean, oh my sweet ocean
I smell your scent among the forests
upon the rivers that flow.
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soul of the ocean. Amazing. certainly a beautiful poem. the sun settle in your arms, xlent. i must like to vote 10+++++++++++
I would love to pirate on this ocean. What a magnificent poem. Utterly beautiful and full of rich metaphor's and love, love, so much love.
I live in the mountains but dream of the ocean. Ode to be a turtle I wish I wish. I would love to Hold a hand that writes as beautiful as you. ~*~Randy
a good poem and specially when u say i ' surrender ' the greatest of all feelings all the words sounds like a lover is this 'KASIAN' way................i truly love the words when they r meant for some love concerns
its so nice poem...loved it........some words i read feel as if am reading for Walt Whitman.....good luck poet...your poem calling the anguish inside my soul............really so nice.....
You are the Beloved's arms; To me as the sun settles in your arms saying goodbye to the world for a brief moment allowing the moon, her lover to shine resting upon your arms in the darkness. (Left me gasping.... may His word flows like endless streams through you...Amen.)
Beautiful poem. You are the Beloved's arms; To me as the sun settles in your arms saying goodbye to the world for a brief moment allowing the moon, her lover to shine resting upon your arms in the darkness. Love these lines.
I absolutely love the imagery! Perfectly stated! well done!