Tuesday, May 19, 2020

Soul Of My Soul Comments

Rating: 4.5

Soul of my soul

Your are in some unknown realm,
Somewhere deep in my consciousness,
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Prabir Gayen
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Ayan Mondal 01 July 2020

You play hide and seek behind my dream and like a flash of lightning smile upon my self, Formless sometimes formed, A living pain with unbearable Joy...//

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Ayan Mondal 01 July 2020

You are in some painful emptiness and careful caress, The image of my being and vibrancy of my heart, The little one to strengthen my meditation and my mysticism.

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Ayan Mondal 01 July 2020

Your are in some unknown realm, Somewhere deep in my consciousness, The Mind within my Mind, My sweet one to take care of me, to bear my legacy and my Soul...//

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Biswajit Roy 11 June 2020

Your are in some unknown realm, Somewhere deep in my consciousness, The Mind within my Mind, My sweet one to take care of me, to bear my legacy and my Soul

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 May 2020

congrats PH has your soul trapped now are at entry 500/500 see how you will win the battles of spiritualists even when no god came to human help all places have been placed out of bounds do u know ppgggggggGGGGGGG UNKNOWN ONES INCLUDED

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Varsha M 20 May 2020

A well woven poem perfectly portraying the agonizing pain of separation. You and me a total me Your formless presence make me miserable. Lovely. Well written. Admirations.

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