Wednesday, February 20, 2008

Soul Of Flames Comments

Rating: 4.1

I sit and watch as the flames lick at the bricks
The red, and orange tipped beauty
The tongues of fury lick
As it burns through the wood and metal preforming its duty
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Bethany Maxwell
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Richard Wlodarski 09 August 2022

Bethany, Congratulations on receiving the honour of POD!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 March 2017

A captivating awesome write. Heartiest Congrats on it's poem of the Day.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 March 2017

The silent wail of a lonely heart. sitting by the fire reminiscing the days gone. nicely composed, it is deeply emotional ink. Congratulations! ! !

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Christina Simmons 23 March 2017

Poem reminds of the loneliness one can experience when single. And there is no one else to turn too but the self. Expressed beautifully. Congratulation! ! !

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Awakening! Epiphany of the soul and revelations of a life long journey penetrating the layers of the many barriers we impose on ourselves or by others..freedom from restraints..good poem, congratulations...

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Chinedu Dike 23 March 2017

Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Bethany.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2017

Flames lick brick mesmerizing mind and life is in wonderful imagery of this poem. Eyes are filled with stars and life is full of emotion. Flame of light licks soul. An interesting poem is well crafted. Congratulations! ....10

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Clarence Prince 23 March 2017

Seeing the those glorious flames of different colours, it sounds wonderful!

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Richard Wlodarski 23 March 2017

A mesmerizing poem with vivid imagery. You've captured the experience very well. Congrats on Poem Of The Day.

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Tom Allport 23 March 2017

a glowing poem that crackles with tears? C O P O T D!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 March 2017

Wonderful sight.....congrats on being selected....

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 March 2017

So Bright! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Yash Shinde 23 October 2012

great great great imagery.....flows so well or burns my heart so well.................I can sese the warmth of flames.brings its picture to my eye

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Bethany Maxwell

Bethany Maxwell

some where in this universe muhahaha
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