Soul Of A Woman Comments
Tears finding their way out of a heart that's been broken and torn apart by abuse, never thinking there were men so cruel and mean to every woman they meet.
Taking their anger and insecurity out on a woman with a kind and compassionate heart, never hurting another soul, wanting nothing in this earthly world.
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In stanza 2, i believe all that follows 'woman' is meant to refer to the woman. But when i first read it, It seemed to refer to the 'men so cruel'. THAT didn't make sense (of course) . I'll suggest following 'woman' with a comma and then: 'a woman'.
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8/16/2025 11:14:09 AM # 1.0.0
Then in stanza 2 I'd start with 'A woman who is'. ;) bri .