Monday, October 12, 2009

Soul Mate Ships On The Seas. (Short) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come sail from time where death we be
Come sail from death into birth with me
Come sail your birth to a lifetime with me
Come sail your lifetime to thoughts of me
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Alison Cassidy 19 October 2009

A highly original and most appealing love poem that flows like a stream of consciousness from the first line to the last. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2009

with me forever and eternity......only pure soul can express such desire and it is fromthe very heart that longs for such things... i totally agree n fall in line with poetess..very well done work and its each line is studded with so powerful message.. i simply love dear.....10 anyhwer...butterflies....no separate ways....miss i miss you..mary to marry

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Tai Chi Italy 12 October 2009

I thought this poem was absolutely adorable...A perfect title too. Smiling at you Tai

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