Wednesday, August 24, 2011

Soul Mate Comments

Rating: 4.0

How can there be one soul who can make our life so much better
Exactly how can this spectacular mortal be the perfect one?
The time I have devoted looking & searching, has paid out
Because I am no longer alone & left out there in the cold.
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Rahman Henry 22 October 2011

Nice Composition. Keep it up. I like your style to express.

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Bhavik Bamania 27 September 2011

Good Poem keep writing good poems......

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Shadow Girl 31 August 2011

Well written..wish i was that lucky!

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Chris Haifley 30 August 2011

Yet another amazing poem (: I love how all your poems clearly state a subject, yet have subtle emotions hidden throughout. Beautiful word choice too. Soulmates are an intereting thing, something so strong it's hard to define. But you've done it with perfect simplicity (: well done.10+++

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Joshua Akinwande 27 August 2011

This is excellent Zainad...

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Debra Martin 27 August 2011

Beautiful just like you, great job! ! !

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David Beckham 25 August 2011

Great love story! Really enjoyed 10/10

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Shamin Shah 25 August 2011

Short and very beautiful... It is one of the poems in which I donot have to read twice or thrice to understand the meaning...v simple and YOU nicely pictured the importance of Soul Mate... 'Because I am no longer alone & left out there in the cold. Finally I have a hand that fills the space in mine.' Loved these lines...

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Excellent, good. Keep-up a good work.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 25 August 2011

...Finally I have a hand that fills the space in mine...(I like this line)

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Eric Cockrell 24 August 2011

very good poem... especially like 'a hand that fills the space in mine...'

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Aqeb Benazir 24 August 2011

'Beauty of Simplicity'...I agree 110% with Claudia down there. this is a very simple and sublime poem. i like it...

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Christina Phan 24 August 2011

Fanastic job. this short poem tell me alot and i enjoy reading the poem.10++

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Claudia Krizay 24 August 2011

Zainab- thank you for sharing this poem and asking me to vote on it. It has a very sweet sentiment and excellent choice of words. A lovely message in simple words and it has always been said that there is beauty in simplicity. And unlike a lot of poetry I have read- this poem makes sense! Maybe you would like to read some of the poetry I have posed on this site? Thanks again for inviting me to read your poem! - Claudia Krizay

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Jo George 24 August 2011

Concise but deep, wonderful creation, love reading it, well done....

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