Saturday, April 11, 2009

Soul Mate Comments

Rating: 4.5

the gypsy said it looking in to my eyes
“He” is your soul mate…
I tried not to laugh
How silly to have thought you
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Violet Val
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James Mclain 04 March 2010

When pursued, by the sun... there what is warm... that I am left to cold, it is made that the central veil, which is your warmth.. plundered by one, if shaken, when it is possible....iip

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James Fumich 06 June 2009

this poem chilled my spine reading it. i enjoyed it a lot. you have an interesting writing style and i enjoy the themes of your poems. thank you for shareing (again) =D.

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 17 April 2009

i hear the voice of ur heart here.. beautiful

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~ Jon London ~ 11 April 2009

Great voice, so much strength that gives this piece more impact. Poetess

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