Sunday, September 14, 2008

Soul Lovers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two souls meet at this flourecent sky
Spread thier artistic wings of fantasy
As the swift wind lifts them up to fly
Landing on a smokey cloud of thoughts
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Pirate Love Magic Man
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Mimi Fakhira 28 January 2009

I like this poem coz it makes me drift away from reality for awhile! Feel free to check on some of mine if you have the time.

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DELETED NOW 17 September 2008

hmmm...(thinking) ...why didn't u put a period at the end? very detailed photo u gave me.... thankx oh gosh! now I'm gonna have a dream about this.

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Stacey Watts 16 September 2008

Wow this is truly a beautiful sentiment... Fantasy is just what it is I suppose not real. Very captivating poem..

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Tyease Collins 14 September 2008

That poem was so beautiful oh my gosh such a beautiful picture painted. Lovely 20/10 -Tess

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pied piper 14 September 2008

Such a wonderful poem Very wells spoken my friend....

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