Monday, October 12, 2020

Soul Collector Comments

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I felt a calling though far away
So I gently left my host.
Passing many universes I began to near
A new loved one in a speckled blue universe.
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Paul T P Burne
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Terry Craddock 30 October 2020

Meeting Of Souls the first goal of meditation is often to empty the mind body of all thought peace love harmony balance are sought extending into potential possibilities a telepathic meeting of souls across vast universe in medium ether through meditation meditative motif speaks with a clear concise message soul desire for comfort in a reality of attained peace with a higher consciousness Dedicated to the poet Paul T P Burne.

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Terry Craddock 18 October 2020

The first goal of meditation is often to empty the body of all thought, peace love harmony balance are sought, this poem extends into the telepathic meeting of souls across the universe in the ether through meditation. 'His spirit was in the ether waiting for me... I glided slowly closer and telepathically asked to enter.' 'Soul Collector' as a meditative motif, speaks with a clear message, the desire for comfort in a reality of attained peace with a higher consciousness.

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Bhavika Dudhani 17 October 2020

Wonderful

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 October 2020

Write comment. Such a nice poem, Paul T. P. B. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Paul T P Burne 12 October 2020

I know I can improve :) if only there were more souls to collect.

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