Soul-Breakers Comments
Oh! bloody thirsty soul breakers
Oh! manipulative nerve wreckers;
Playing with the beings like puppets,
Relishing their hearts in buffets.
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A greater God Being indeed will set it all right; in spite of our self proclaimed greatness. Good write.
A wonderful write Doctor, well thought out and with a good message, 10 Lynda xx
Doctor! I believe this is your best write with a strong train of thought, a strong rhythm, and I love the message of warning to the evil few who manage to cause pain to many. thanks for sharing this
like winged immortal bird sees everything....yet! nature capture the meaning of existence...Yah! we want to stop everything that is not fitting and good for human...but the passion of pain remain in each heart of a person and its His/Her freedom to do....your poem ignite every poet and reader to wonder the meaning of all that exist... thank you...a perfect lines for reflection....a 10+++++ for you
The vultures and chameleons should have read this master piece.....powerful eloquent poem written....10+++
Powerful and hits the conscience straight.......wish this message is passed, a must read for all, thanks Hitesh
If Romeo & Juliette still alive? Definitely they come to you Doctor for a full check up.
Well written and thought provoking. A wise view into those that would kill romance :) Thank you for sharing.
justice will be served, one way or another, if not now, then later...
Wronging others is punishment all by itself, since it disturbs the fabric of society into blaming eachtother. Didn´t the popgroup REM sing it hurts to blame? Angelgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd
Dear Hitesh Sheth Beautiful poem with a tinge of philosophy and poets wisdom. Fine vocabulary and apt usage. A very creative aesthetic work flled with intelligence.Wisdom wakes up by invocking fear of god, Fear is one's consciousness. Good work. You may read and comment on my poems as well Greetings Satheesan Rangorath
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7/23/2025 1:48:25 PM # 1.0.0
A powerful message for the ones who have deviated from the line of ethics, values and principles. Splendid!