If eyes are truly a window to the soul
And soul reflects true love
Why can you not see me?
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If your 'You' is Love its self then I for one will agree with all your poem does decree and thank you for the wonder of the way you say, love will set us free.
'You are you with your heart and soul.' what a wonderful ending to a poem filled with love for the object of your affection. I love the way you describe what you're feeling, like 'singing upon a rain cloud for you' and 'a shining sunlight that brightens my day...I really like this, I have a eyes are windows on here to, but this makes mine pale....keep them coming, Michelle all away across the Pond...marci :)
I was hooked from the first, inspired, stanza. t x