Friday, March 16, 2007

Soul Comments

Rating: 4.8

If eyes are truly a window to the soul
And soul reflects true love
Why can you not see me?
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Michelle Tiddy
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I was hooked from the first, inspired, stanza. t x

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David Taylor 16 March 2007

If your 'You' is Love its self then I for one will agree with all your poem does decree and thank you for the wonder of the way you say, love will set us free.

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Marci Made 16 March 2007

'You are you with your heart and soul.' what a wonderful ending to a poem filled with love for the object of your affection. I love the way you describe what you're feeling, like 'singing upon a rain cloud for you' and 'a shining sunlight that brightens my day...I really like this, I have a eyes are windows on here to, but this makes mine pale....keep them coming, Michelle all away across the Pond...marci :)

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

Staffordshire, England
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