Sunday, October 12, 2014

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Wind blowing hurriedly through, causing ideas to flow
heavily, muddily, through the slime of yesterday.

Trying to sort out thoughts to place on paper, is very
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 13 October 2014

WOW! WOW! This poem expresses exactly the thoughts that were just tumbling through my mind for the past twenty odd minutes. I took a break after responding to the poem I described as having gorgeous language (I forget the title) . I was wrestling with my inability tonight to write fluently in response to your wonderful poems. I can't seem to find the right vocabulary or the right tone. I've erased and started over three times! But this poem addresses that very crisis and offers a solution. To write prose with the flow of music. I'm putting some music of Bach played by Glenn Gould! I know what this poem means and what it does. It's a Rescue Poem!

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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