Monday, April 13, 2020

Sorry To Focus, Refocus, Defocus On The Animal Farm: An Allegory Comments

Rating: 4.5

Blizzards, wildfires, Tsunamis and hurricanes caused no trauma
Nor earthquakes & erupted volcanoes did any catostopic drama
Bam, boom, bang, humanbomb blasted in a jungle causing death
With shuddering, trembling & tearing as a misery struck
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Michael Walkerjohn 13 April 2020

Aloha Harindhar... Cheers mate... clearly you have focus... just a bit more brushing up on the presentation and you will have arrived at bingo! You know what I mean... do not hurry a better post... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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Harindhar Reddy 13 April 2020

Dear Mr. Walkerjohn you are right as the rain as this poem needs to more compact and it is half finished too, will take a day or more to add all dimensions...... You have made my day by your honest comment. I will take in to my stride and develop the poem.... Thank you....cheers!

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