sorry
that i gave lovely glances
to you everyday.
sorry
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Thanks for being honest you made me understand; a beautiful drop i like it, thanks jenie.
Sorry and Thank You, the three beautiful words so nicely used. A very straight forward and touching poem. Very much liked the comments of Don Nguyen and quite agree with him.
Thanks and Sorry are two words that we must use often, in this beautiful write i can say i give you claps..do write more_Soul
hi jenie very beautiful thanks for your nice feeling good luck
The person you wrote seem s like a sweet man who really cares for you. I dont think it was a revenge, his last look on you probably had pieved his heart as well. I hope Revenge is simply poetic expression and you didnt mean it. Your poem sounds so sweet and loving though, I love it.
Well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Jenie.