Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Sorry Mom Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm sorry Mom, I'm sorry Mom
I must apologize for I'm wrong
I'm sorry Mom, I'm sorry Mom
I need a chance to be strong
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Rishi Menon
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Philo Yan 15 September 2012

He writes poems and only eleven. He writes poems that rhymes, What did I do when eleven? Studying hard? Sometimes. A wonderful read. You have the gift of words and have the advantage of youth. I believe you will grow up to be someone in the literary world. Good Luck!

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Arfa Iris 16 October 2011

A VERY NICE COMPOSITION........... TRUE FEELINGS OF A SON.......... ANY WOMAN WILL B PROUD TO B UR MOTHER..... 'SON' I GIVE 10+++ FOR THE WRITE.........

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Apurva Gore 27 May 2009

This was a very nice poem and thanks because this will help me convince my mom.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 26 April 2009

nice piece, keep writing

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Lowly Dreamer 08 November 2008

Nowadays, people always think they are right and our so wrapped up in their infallibility to realize when they are wrong. It takes a lot to say you're sorry and I'm proud you can do it(: Fabulous poem xo Meg

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Joseph Poewhit 23 September 2008

MOM, can be the best catalist for success

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