Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Sorry Maa... Comments

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The day when you were waiting
For the moment to see me crown
That was the first day when I hurt you
The day when I was born
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Preetam Shetty
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Anita Trivedi 07 June 2010

Really a great tribute to your mother.......... so wel written.............

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Gita Ashok 20 May 2010

Such a wonderful tribute to your mother. Great job.

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Ramin Chaman 15 May 2010

I didn’t really have the time To walk with you on the lobby I didn’t even remember That I am a part of your body ......... A poem full of pulchritude

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Anonymous Butterfly 14 May 2010

Really emotional an filled with love to the one that gave you life. Hugs and kisses. xoxo. B.B.

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Amrit Rathi 14 May 2010

A poem full of nostalgic memories and sad reality that we are not able to respond or repay the sacrifices made by mother for us. Very nice poem. Kee writing. Thanks for sharing..

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Juan Olivarez 13 May 2010

I think your poem is beautiful and well thought out, your only problem i see is the grammatics, but i beleive that is no obstacle. God bless.

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