The day when you were waiting
For the moment to see me crown
That was the first day when I hurt you
The day when I was born
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I didn’t really have the time To walk with you on the lobby I didn’t even remember That I am a part of your body ......... A poem full of pulchritude
Really emotional an filled with love to the one that gave you life. Hugs and kisses. xoxo. B.B.
A poem full of nostalgic memories and sad reality that we are not able to respond or repay the sacrifices made by mother for us. Very nice poem. Kee writing. Thanks for sharing..
I think your poem is beautiful and well thought out, your only problem i see is the grammatics, but i beleive that is no obstacle. God bless.
Really a great tribute to your mother.......... so wel written.............