Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Sorry, I Thought I Had More Time! Comments

Rating: 5.0

This morning as I shaved, I saw a stranger in my mirror.
Not the young man my mind told me should be there,
But someone a lot like my father staring back at me.
Brown hair had been replaced with gray that began
...
Read full text

Roy Davenport
COMMENTS
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

It was really a great description. The poem gave me a shudder. Incredible imagery and great theme. Thanks for sharing..... I've no option but rate it 10/10 If time permits, kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

0 0 Reply
Roy Davenport

Roy Davenport

Greenville, SC, USA
Close
Error Success