I wanna feel the nail go thru my hand
I wanna feel the thorns go through my skin
I wanna feel what you feel when i commit a sin
I wanna be mocked and spit on
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that's how i feel everyday. i guess i'm not the only one: ')
Absolutely Beautiful! ! Keep on writing. i look foward reading more of your poems! R3B3L x
Ok this one really made me cry...I feel sometimes we all get 2 far from God and feel this way...and somtimes we dnt really apreciate all that Jesus did for us after all he died just so we can be 4giving for the sins we comment and will comment. Now what man do u know will do that for anyone. You really allowed God 2 speak thru u with this. Thanx so much DIMPLZ
what a great piece of writing...i think such confessions no body wud have ever done in hon'ble church also... Christ bless this girl!
nobody perfect hon. god made everybody that way for a reason. wether you believe in god or not. god loves all of us no matter what. remember that.
i went to a christian school for bout 6 years all together and we had to memorize verses and my third grade teacher asked me one time, she said, 'did the nails keep Jesus on the cross? ' i replied, 'yes.' she said, 'no, His love for us did.' its been many years since then, but i still remember that like it happened yesterday. you have made mistakes, but He loves you no matter what. He made you. you are His. the things that have happened to you are not at all fair, and the person who did those things should be punished and believe me, i bet God's not too thrilled bout what he that dude did to you, but God will always love you, no matter what. i will pray for you. and itll be ok. =)
WOW! this is a really good poem! I really like this one! i am adding it to my fav poem list. Very well written.
the emotion just flows out from the verses..brilliantly done.. u amazing
'Mea Culpa', Dramatic poetic confession and desire of sacrifice. Dramatically but very sincerely written! Extraordinary and unforgettable!