Wednesday, April 6, 2016

Sorry! Dear Vayu* Comments

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Breezing through rustling leaves, signs of a life commence
I adore you as cut on umbilical cord signals your presence.

Most precious of all, you sustain me through vitals
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Rajnish Manga 15 May 2016

You have based your narrative on mythology as well as science, on ancient thought as well as present day findings. Loved reading it. Thank you, Tribhawan ji. I would like to quote: Most precious of all, you sustain me what an elixir you are! ..... Air air, you are everywhere

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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