Sorry About It Comments

i'd type 'overhear'. ;) favorite lines: My ego is not massive and my depression is real. And the anxiety is more than just a feel. Why can't you leave me out of your life? I'm not your business, I'm not your wife...................nice expression and rhyming well, the the third stanza i like very much also. i 'love' .....alien/i am in rhyme! Of course not cause you're to worried talking about me. ......i would use 'cause (added apostrophe) and TOO, not 'to'. ha ha! to MyPoemList. bri :) maybe a showcase someday? bri :)

Hi Chryssa, Another poem, expressing the angst and agonies, responsive of the pain that inflict upon us. By their un-thoughtful actions and words. The world is harsh on those lie down and suffer. On those Who do not stand up and fight. So, a fighter you have to be. An d always stand up. Upright! Beautifully written. With fantastic rhymes and rhythm. Without causing any disturbance the flow of words. Chryssa, you are quite a talented poet. Should write more and share. All the best.10++