Sunday, July 2, 2006

Sorry Comments

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Hey. I think I may have offended you.
So I thought I'd write this to say
Although i didnt mean to,
Im sorry for what i said today.
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Louise Wilkinson
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Jeff Hobbs 02 July 2006

Baroke, smoke, folk, revoke, stoke, toke, awoke - I guess I should say sorry for that too! This is a poem which is so filled with the absolute moment and situation that it comes of as a part of the reality of life. If only people could say sorry in such a way more often.... me included!

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Séamus Fox 02 July 2006

Bloke joke soak stoke. This is lovely Louise heart on your sleeve I like it people dont show their feelings enough thats why there is so much animosity in the world. Seamus

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Sugar Bear 02 July 2006

Aww! This poem is Beautiful! Not awful at all!

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