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Sorrows Come Not In Vain Comments

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As is autumn, as is fall
For a tree that has grown tall,
So is sorrow for a human heart—
Shaking off yellow leaves apart
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Pallab Chaudhury 04 March 2020

Nicely crafted- as if an opportunity for self realization... With warm wishes and regds pc

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 March 2020

Thanks dear PC, yes, very much for self realization, a keen observation dear poet. I've made a small change in the last stanza....You see, a poem is always a work in progress.

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