Friday, November 30, 2018

Sorrowful Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

What if I never realised
What love actually is
Let slip all the good that came to me
Let go the only love I ever knew
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Matthew Holloway
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Carl Roussell 30 November 2018

At times you hurt those around you in trying to navigate life, and want to take upon yourself the pain you have caused. A really good write, and a 10

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Matthew Holloway 30 November 2018

Thank you, i am remorseful and sorry for my actions but as you say it's part of life's journey

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Practicing Poetess 30 November 2018

This poem shouts volumes! And I hope somehow that its sincere and anguished sentiments will find their way into the hands, hearts, and ears of the intended recipients about whom this poem is written. Lovely work.

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Matthew Holloway 30 November 2018

Thank you, it is honestly sincere and I hope it is received in such a fashion

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Matthew Holloway

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