Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, May 23, 2009

Sorrowful Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is like vast ocean,
Full of sorrow and pain,
Joy less and worry main,
Not to loose hope and energy regain,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Ernest Makuakua 05 February 2016

who understands life but never lament? No regrets but passing the comment trying very hard to overcome the shock Time never stops as clicks the time in clock powerful poem there my friend with a lot to learn beautiful

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Kunwar Patel 24 October 2009

Learning a lesson from each failure, Content with less and not more procure, Difficulties more but will to endure, If no immediate result but success sure,

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Louis Rams 19 September 2009

the last stanze says it all to me when success knocks and failures ceases. good write

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Suresh Vakil 19 August 2009

lie is indeed sorrowful....10

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Kant Shri 16 August 2009

u should know how to swim it....10

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Chaul Vania 16 August 2009

very good and inspirational poem....10

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Argum Sheth 15 August 2009

life is sorrowful occean....10

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Durga Sethani 15 August 2009

it is indeed sorroful....10

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Rupa Shah 14 August 2009

it is full of sorrow....10

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Jayant Manik 12 August 2009

in reality it is....10

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Sonu Dhanraj 10 August 2009

life is termed like that...10

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Ketan Rajgor 02 August 2009

Life is vast like ocean, it is so vast and deep...10

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Ratna Patel 02 August 2009

Life is vast like ocean, it is vast and deep...10

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Ritul Soni 30 July 2009

Life is vast like ocean, Full of sorrow and pain, life has many angles...10

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Pittle Shaileja 27 July 2009

Life is vast like ocean, Full of sorrow and pain, Joy less and worry remain, Not to loose strength but regain, vast and deep sorrowful occean...10

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Bharati Bhikhubhai 24 July 2009

Life is vast like ocean, if life is such then how u take it? ....10

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Vinod Karmakar 23 July 2009

Life is vast like ocean, ..life is ocean...10

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Dalsukh S 23 July 2009

If life was to be smooth, , , u will take it lightly...10

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Trevor William 23 July 2009

Learning a lesson from each failure, each time we have to learn....10

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Pradip Pillai 23 July 2009

Life is vast like ocean, Full of sorrow and pain, ..it is sorrowful...10

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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