Monday, April 23, 2018

Sorrowful Minds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tears running on the floor,
With the tap pressure, it keeps filling the bucket,
So heavy and cloudy it will rain,
As it drizzled to rain out our pain,
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Jcson Jenuis
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 January 2019

Very well scripted deserves the POD.......thanks for sharing

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Chinedu Dike 23 May 2018

A story of existential adversity told in eloquent finesse, with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Jcson.

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Britte Ninad 23 May 2018

melancholic notes are pervaded over all nice 10++++

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 April 2018

Write comment. Nice imagination, Jcson. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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