Tuesday, July 4, 2017

Sorrow Solidified Comments

Rating: 5.0

A teardrop
stays
long suspended
in my eyes
...
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 March 2019

Long suspended tear drop expresses emotion and this is no more stubborn. When wind will be blown this will be shaken and fall down. Feeling of agony will be warmed up by next day's sunlight. We hope solidified sorrow will melt by touch of greater happiness. A great poem of tears is excellently penned...10

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Akhtar Jawad 13 August 2017

Tears play a very important role in our lives, sometimes tears relieve us from the deadly mental strains. A nice description of human sentiments.

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A brilliant write, Valsa. An excellent image too. When the tears drop down it cleanses the whole being. Until then it is a heavy burden! 100+++

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Savita Tyagi 12 July 2017

Beautiful! Delicate as a teardrop crafted like a fine piece of jewelry. Eyes admire it and heart touches it. Thanks for sharing Valsa.

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Rajnish Manga 12 July 2017

Highly emotional piece of poetry. As Susan Williams has pointed out, tears do exhibit a sense of dignity. Matchless expression. Thanks.

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Susan Williams 11 July 2017

I applaud the dignity of this poem. It is difficult to pen a poem about sorrow that is able to reach out and touch the reader's heart and wake true compassion yet retain a graceful dignity. Superlative write, my friend. 10's abound here

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Muhammad Ali 11 July 2017

masterpiece. beauty of saying.

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A beautiful presentation of the last expectation.

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Denis Mair 07 July 2017

From a suspended teardrop comes words with the solidity of stone. The poet weighing words of stone has an inborn wish...to balance them with wind.

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Nosheen Irfan 07 July 2017

A remarkable write. A succinct gem that depicts a longing to be free of the heart's burdens. It's hard to live with suppressed emotions. They must find an outlet so we must keep our hope of a new dawn alive. A sure 10.

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Bharati Nayak 06 July 2017

A teardrop stays long suspended in my eyes stubborn not to spill I wait for a wind to shake it loose in the dead of the night to empty me of my agony to feel waking out of a nightmare to a sunlit clear morn - - - - - - - - -A stunningly beautiful write.We just can't express all our emotions.Some just remain deep inside and torment us.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 July 2017

Tear drops provide relief from grief. If eye cannot have tears, the doctor prescribes artificial tear drops.

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Loke Kok Yee 05 July 2017

Just wipe it off and have another dream That will bring to your eyes a happy gleam Your nightmare will go with a bit of luck And no longer will you be with fear struck I have this great ability to pinch my self and wake up whenever I have a nightmare. Fortunately; I don't get nightmares anymore in my old age.Thanks Valsa for sharing your lovely poem with us.

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Simone Inez Harriman 04 July 2017

I believe to cry is such a healing thing to happen. I'm sure the release of tears chemically balances the body. I know after a frustrating sad day and the tears come I feel more able to cope and look at it in a different way.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2017

Tear in one's eye stays for long time like a stubborn child and it spills later and makes empty the agony having relaxation of mind. It is a beautiful poem on tear. Thanks.

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Lamar Cole 04 July 2017

Very good write about a teardrop.

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