Sunday, May 3, 2009

~sorrow's Set~ Comments

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The thorn that hides
burrows deeper than wide,
A flame which burns
never will subside.
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Rory Hudson 03 May 2009

Nice sensitive writing with a slow rhythm. I find the 1,2,4 rhyme scheme artificial and unnecessary, however.

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