Without sorrow life is zero
We must accept fate's arrow
If our efforts are thorough
Our sorrow, God will borrow
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A brilliant poem. Loved the lines: Via sorrows, remedies we find sorrows are indirectly kind....Appreciated the poem in its totality.
Like a raw diamond attains brilliant sparkle after being ground on a grinding stone, so does man shine after he is ground on the stone of sorrows, failures and losses
I really, really liked your poem! You are right about sorrow although when one feels it, it doesn't seem right at all. Peace
This is a well written poem with instructive thematic.