Friday, November 13, 2015

Sorrow Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

A paradise dream
gone with the winds of evil
demons long to rule
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Melvina Germain
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Abderrahmane Dakir 09 January 2016

In a few lines. You can express a hard truth. Thank you for sharing this awesome poem.

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Loke Kok Yee 14 November 2015

you are sure in a sorrowful mood to day thanks Melvina

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 November 2015

Demons long to rule even the paradise! Horrible thing, nicely expressed in the haiku. Enjoyed reading.Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2015

And that's the sorrowful truth....10

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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