Sorrow always finds me Close
During my utter despondence
Sorrow always finds me close
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This is wonderful imagination. no one comes to my hut. but later you fall into a garden of love where you kill all your loneliness. in between you fall deep into a world of imaginative motives. loved your poem very very much. tony
Sorrow stands close by many of us. And when we are alone, it is amplified. But, as you indicate, in sleep we can dream and pretend things are otherwise. This is our escape. A very emotion-filled poem that so many of us can relate to. Well done!
Nice imagery in your poem. Inspiring and purposeful. I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing 10+++
A common experience and a colourful imagination complement each other. This is the way to live. Thank you for sharing.10
Nicely done! I love the tone and the choice of words used! . Thanks for sharing this lovely poem KW
'In my forsaken garden'; but, there is hope. Nice work.
A touching poem, nicely penned.....................