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Sorrow Always Finds Me Close Comments

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Sorrow always finds me Close

During my utter despondence
Sorrow always finds me close
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shakil ahmed
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Akhtar Jawad 05 December 2015

A touching poem, nicely penned.....................

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 December 2015

This is wonderful imagination. no one comes to my hut. but later you fall into a garden of love where you kill all your loneliness. in between you fall deep into a world of imaginative motives. loved your poem very very much. tony

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Lorraine Colon 02 December 2015

Sorrow stands close by many of us. And when we are alone, it is amplified. But, as you indicate, in sleep we can dream and pretend things are otherwise. This is our escape. A very emotion-filled poem that so many of us can relate to. Well done!

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M Asim Nehal 02 December 2015

Nice imagery in your poem. Inspiring and purposeful. I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing 10+++

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Sumit Ganguly 01 December 2015

A common experience and a colourful imagination complement each other. This is the way to live. Thank you for sharing.10

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Kewayne Wadley 30 November 2015

Nicely done! I love the tone and the choice of words used! . Thanks for sharing this lovely poem KW

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Manonton Dalan 30 November 2015

poem rhyme like song...this is great

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Spock The Vegan 30 November 2015

Very nice. TFS

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 November 2015

'In my forsaken garden'; but, there is hope. Nice work.

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