Wednesday, July 5, 2017

Sorrow Comments

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Sorrow I will not sit with you.
I will not wait while my life drains away.
I will not listen to you insist
That I am nothing but living dust
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Tom Allport 05 July 2017

a poem of being aware of ones own abilities and then to move slowly forward to better things? .........well written.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2017

This is wise ever not to wait, wait and sit with sorrow or to feel this for long time. Trying silence for mind is definitely very nice solution. Wonderful and thoughtful poem is shared here.....10

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Suzanne Hayasaki 05 July 2017

Thank you for your kind comments about my poem.

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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