Thursday, November 13, 2014

Sorrow Comments

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please leave me alone
forget we ever met
never hug me again
or kiss me on the lip
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Chinedu Dike 03 March 2017

Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. A great poem Kenneth. Kudos!

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Khairul Ahsan 18 March 2015

I have just read your first poem on this site. It's a poem of profound sadness expressed through heartfelt cries, wrapped in verses. Words run very deep into the readers' mind. As a result, a strong empathy grows. Well done! Looking forward to reading some more of your poems, soon.

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

Maun, Botswana
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